Welcoming Our Twins Review ~ Excellent scenes and dialogues … 9 out of 10!

Making a Family Book 9

Author: Rosa Swann

Release Date:  01 January 2018                  Price: $2.99

Reviewed by: Sophie

Cover Art:  I am impressed by the fact that the author has kept the same cover art throughout the series. If I had been the author, I would have gotten so bored.

Main Characters:  This is the ninth installment of Aiden and Clay’s story. The couple await the birth of the twins that they conceived in episode one. They have grown from strangers to a married couple.

Secondary characters: The twin babies are added to the cast of minor characters in this episode. I liked the way the author wrote these people.

Writing Style: The author continued with the previous episode’s narrative style. Clay and Aiden’s separate narration of the individual chapter still works excellently.  Another thing that I found nice about the author’s style was her use of dialogue. I think that she wrote it well. It really flowed off the page.

Plot: It is not a challenging premise; the story line is straightforward. Aiden and Clay finally have their twins.

Conflict/Climax: This was a conflict free episode. The climax of the entire series, in my opinion was the birth of the twins. I think the birth was dealt with nicely.

Flow/Continuity: The author neatly inserted this episode into the series. I think that the characters have easily metamorphosed from strangers into parents. Amid this change, the characters have not lost their original selves. What was present in the beginning remains within Clay and Aiden.

Conclusion: I think that this was a great episode. It has excellent scenes and dialogue. I specifically liked the birth scene and the scenes of baby bonding. I think that this episode was better than the one before.

For all these reasons, I give this episode 9 out of ten stars!

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